Cross Country Run

Cross Country Run - Writing Plan

Who is my audience?	My Family
Paragraph plan.      What are the topics I’m going to write about?	1. On the course their were muddy puddles 2. it was sunny for our cross country run. 3. How i felt and the finish line.
What are some words, special vocabulary I can use to make my message clear?	panting hard heart pounding
What does my introduction need to do?	Speak clear and long sentences or short sentences.

Cross Country Run  - writing

My Introduction

I was shy for the Cross Country run I hope that I won't come last if I did I will be embarrassed. But i didn’t come last.

Paragraph about:  Cross Country Run

There were heaps of muddy puddles. My feet was starting to get slimey and muddy and I nearly slipped.

Paragraph about: What was the weather like?

The weather was sunny and shiny  for the run. The sun was shining on the muddy parts of the field to make it hard so we won't slip. Some of us slipped but  I didn’t.