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Wednesday, 19 March 2014

Show Not Tell

Show Not Tell By Daroma And Mohammed.


Emily said “Can i come with you to the shop?” Lura said “No you're too young”. Emily started to frown she stomped her feet and stomped down the stairs.
Emily went to her bedroom and grabbed a book and chuck it down in the ground.


When Emily got out of her bedroom she slammed the door hard as she can. Lura said to “Emily Will you come with me to the shop?” Emily clammed down and said “I will come with you sister.


Mary was excited to go to the mall. her big sister said “you're too small to come to the mall. Mary said  “Thats not fair!!!” Mary got angry and went to the living room angry.


Her big sister said “i have been little bit rough to her” she said. “Mary you can come with me to the mall.” Mary sat down and count to 10.  Then she said “i will come with you” Mary said.   



 

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