Dana big day

               

Intro

Once a upon time there was a Sheep called Dana.  Dana was happy to be with her friends.  She ate grass happily with her friends. When Dana heard a bark she was scared.

Dana was really scared of dogs. There were some coming into her paddock. She started to run away from the Dogs. The Dogs were chasing Dana and her friends.

When Dana was getting chased she and her friends ran to the shearing shed. Dana and her friends were locked up at the shed. She was scared.

Dana said ‘’I remember this  last year.’’ “I hope its not that bad” said  one of her friends.‘’ Then Dana said “I hope i am not going to die.’’ ‘’Don’t worry Dana’’ said one of her friends.

It was time to shear the Sheep. Dana was scared “I hope its not that bad” said Dana. “Look at those sheep” said one of her friends. “They look skinny and naked” said one of her friends.

Dana was still in the shed she was scared and kind of sad. “Dana” said one of her friends. “Why are you sad.” “Because i think i am going to die” said Dana.” “You're not going to die” said her friend.

When it was Dana’s turn she was scared ”Hey put me down!” said Dana. What are you doing to me. The farmer took her to the shearing room. The farmer cut every part of the wool. ”Ahhhhhhhh!!!” said Dana “Let me go!”

 “Finally its over” said Dana. “It wasn’t that bad” said her friend. Dana and her friends were naked and skinny. “I feel kind of happy” said Dana.

Dana felt really happy to be skinny and not fat. Dana and her friends were really happy. THE END

Lambing time

The Boy Who Cried Wolf

Cross Country Run

Cross Country Run - Writing Plan

Who is my audience?	My Family
Paragraph plan.      What are the topics I’m going to write about?	1. On the course their were muddy puddles 2. it was sunny for our cross country run. 3. How i felt and the finish line.
What are some words, special vocabulary I can use to make my message clear?	panting hard heart pounding
What does my introduction need to do?	Speak clear and long sentences or short sentences.

Cross Country Run  - writing

My Introduction

I was shy for the Cross Country run I hope that I won't come last if I did I will be embarrassed. But i didn’t come last.

Paragraph about:  Cross Country Run

There were heaps of muddy puddles. My feet was starting to get slimey and muddy and I nearly slipped.

Paragraph about: What was the weather like?

The weather was sunny and shiny  for the run. The sun was shining on the muddy parts of the field to make it hard so we won't slip. Some of us slipped but  I didn’t.

couplets

1.

I was eating a carrot

Than I saw a parrot.

2.

I was looking near a tree

“I saw  a  big bee.

3.

I saw a bule a ball

It was very small.

Quiz about New Zealand Sea lions

I have been learning about New Zealand Sea lions. Take my quiz to test what you know.

The strange shoe

       What is a shoe? it is a footwear.

        What is it used for? Wearing on your feet to walk.

        Who uses a shoe? A man.

        Where can you get some shoes? In a shoe shop.

130 Pt England Rd   Point England Auckland 1072 Dear Animals,Bear,tiger,Monkey,Deer,wolf,Owl A shoe is a footwear you wear on your feet to keep your feet warm Mohammed Thank you