I am a Year 7 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Class 4 and my teacher is Ms Squires.
Tuesday, 17 September 2013
Tuesday, 10 September 2013
Cross Country Run
Cross Country Run - Writing Plan
Who is my audience?
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My Family
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Paragraph plan.
What are the topics I’m going to write about?
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1. On the course their were muddy puddles
2. it was sunny for our cross country run.
3. How i felt and the finish line.
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What are some words, special vocabulary I can use to make my message clear?
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panting hard
heart pounding
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What does my introduction need to do?
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Speak clear and long sentences or short sentences.
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Cross Country Run - writing
My Introduction
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I was shy for the Cross Country run I hope that I won't come last if I did I will be embarrassed. But i didn’t come last.
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Paragraph about: Cross Country Run
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There were heaps of muddy puddles. My feet was starting to get slimey and muddy and I nearly slipped.
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Paragraph about: What was the weather like?
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The weather was sunny and shiny for the run. The sun was shining on the muddy parts of the field to make it hard so we won't slip. Some of us slipped but I didn’t.
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Tuesday, 3 September 2013
couplets
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I was eating a carrot
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Than I saw a parrot.
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2.
I was looking near a tree
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“I saw a big bee.
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3.
I saw a bule a ball
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It was very small.
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