Show Not Tell Part 2

                     Show Not Tell Part 2

                               

Josh was trying to sleep. Suddenly he heard a creak and froze. He crept out of his bed and hid under his bed. His hands got sweaty then he heard a another creak. His heart was pounding fast. He went to his window and saw that a was tree scraping the side of the house. Feeling relieved he went back into bed and went to sleep.

Tropical Cyclone Lusi

Tropical cyclone By Mohammed,Daroma and Damien.

Tropical Cyclone Lusi  happened in NZ in the weekend. There were heavy rains and strong winds. It was in NZ. It blew down trees  and power lines so that lots of  houses lost power. In Christchurch and Northland lots of houses power. Christchurch  lost 7000 houses and Northland lost 2000.       

There was an event called Poly-fest that was cancelled because there was lots of rain and wind.

When the cyclone hit Vanuatu  3 people died.  There was a 6 years old boy killed and  a man and woman were hit by flying  debris.

Show Not Tell

Show Not Tell By Daroma And Mohammed.

Emily said “Can i come with you to the shop?” Lura said “No you're too young”. Emily started to frown she stomped her feet and stomped down the stairs.

Emily went to her bedroom and grabbed a book and chuck it down in the ground.

When Emily got out of her bedroom she slammed the door hard as she can. Lura said to “Emily Will you come with me to the shop?” Emily clammed down and said “I will come with you sister.

Mary was excited to go to the mall. her big sister said “you're too small to come to the mall. Mary said  “Thats not fair!!!” Mary got angry and went to the living room angry.

Her big sister said “i have been little bit rough to her” she said. “Mary you can come with me to the mall.” Mary sat down and count to 10.  Then she said “i will come with you” Mary said.   

 

3 Poem

                         Poem By Christopher , Mohammed and Damien

1.Yo my Name is Mohammed I am a yr 7 I learn everyday to succeed school.

2.Yo my name is Damien I go pt England school I go because it is the best

3. Yo my name chris I am just what we do at school is be cool